Based on the learning journals you have completed: apply relevant scholarly concepts, theories and models to examine and analyse how these experiences could influence your future employability behaviours and/or attitudes

the document uploaded is the work I did, i just want you to add theortical ideas related to emotional intelligence  and relate them, you are to improve the language and how that may influence my future employability

Application of appropriate concepts, theories and/or models. Used to evaluate the influence of the chosen events or examples on your future employability behaviours and/ or attitudes.

1. Does the theory work in practice? Identification of any limits of the concepts and theories and modules you have applied in your analysis.
2. Focus must be on application of concepts, theories and models to the chosen significant events or examples; do not just provide a summary of the concept, theory or model. Use your own words. No lengthy quotations from the work of other writers; no cutting and pasting from other sources.

you are required to write 500 words more extra to the original text