Hi, again you need more work on the paper.
The introduction is wrong . You have to change that and rewrite again. You need summary of Nathan in the introduction. You need a thesis that evaluates Nathan .

For the body paragraphs you need better verbs. And you need specific things like in second paragraph in the first line you say students but which students. Who are they ? Be specific about things . You need quote analysis in every paragraph at-least 1 or 2 quotes in each paragraph and the explaining about the quote and the examples. In the third paragraph who is stahl you need to tell the reader don’t assume that the reader knows that. And If you use quote please put the in text citations and the page number. And don’t end up the paragraph with the quote . In all the paragraphs you need to focus more on how the argument or evidence evaluates Nathan claim.
Focus more on introduction. I will provide the instructions what you need in that.
1. The introduction should include this things;
Introduce Nathan credentials,book title, major claim. This should be the first line of the introduction. Then brief summary of the Nathan. Then you can put the thesis. Thesis will include you need to evaluate something that you want to write about. Evaluates Nathan claim. Don’t evaluates American students.

Then for the each body paragraphs you have to evaluating Nathan claim or the <link is hidden> body paragraphs should include atleast 1 quote . I am providing the format for how to use quote in the body paragraphs.
1. You need context for the quote like who said it, when , what’s being discussed .
2. Then put the quote in MLA citation and the in text citation too.
3. Then explanation of the quote . How do you interpret the quote ?
4. Finally connect with the thesis. How does this support the thesis ?
To cover up the paragraph tell something about that idea.

You can take time for this paper. You have 2 weeks to complete it. .

1. The introduction needs work.
2. Title should be specific.
3. Don’t include stahl in introduction.
4. I will provide the paper instructions.
5. And I will provide the feedback from the instructor. You can change from that.
6. I think you have to rewrite the paper again.
Needs work in conclusion.
I will provide the feedback and you to choose specific topic. Classroom or making friends. It is all over the place.
I will provide the feedback so you can see.

1. Add more introduction more lines.
2. In body paragraph after the quote provide an example. Provide a transition words for different idea. Add a final line in body paragraph . Check the grammar too many mistakes . Provide a page number after a author name in In text citation.
3. Provide more lines in conclusion .
4. 3 pages full
It was not full 3 pages .

Check this things carefully please. Thanks.
If you have any questions please contact me as soon as possible .
4. Provide me the paper in 24 hours.

Can you follow the sample I send it you. Because the essay you send it is like what I need. In first paragraph you need the introduction, 1-2 lines summary about the both articles. In second paragraph , you have to take quote and gave examples about that. In third and fourth paragraph you have to do same thing as second paragraph. In last paragraph you have to write conclusion. You will see in the sample. Just follow the sample. I need the paper by tommorow the monday. Thanks. If you have question message me as soon as posssible.

You did not provide in text citations and the page number.

You did not provide in text citations. And the page number that you took the quote.

Hi, you did not provide any quote. In this paper we need atleast 3 to 4 quotes. You just write the summary. Summary should only one paragraph. And in others paragraph you have to take quote and explain about that quote.

The another three article is by same author but it is different articles. It is online on google. 1. The truth: Americans reveal what they really think of international students by stahl 2. “Why aren’t Americans and International students becoming friends?” By stahl 3. “Americans are self-centered but friendly?”by stahl Can you pass this email to the writer!

I am providing the article through email. And you have to use the the observation I did as one source. I m providing that observation too. So total of 3 sources. The two articles and the observation.