My requirement are

just read the essay carefully and edit it.plzz make the sentence more clear. fix the grammar. for each quote I want these steps

this is an example about how to introduce the author just for the first time in the essay. but for all the quotes you have to explain it using step 4 and 5.

Steps 1 & 2) Damien Cave, writer and Phillips Foundation Fellow, wrote an article called

“On Sale at Old Navy: Cool Clothes for Identical Zombies,” where he discusses the detrimental

effects consumerism has on the general public. (Step 3) He argues, “When people spend so

much time buying, thinking and talking about products, they don’t have time for anything else,

for real conversations about politics or culture or for real interaction with people” (Cave 29).

(Step 4) What Cave is trying to assert is that American citizens’ obsession with consumerism

can negatively affect their relationships with important issues in society, and especially other

people. (Step 5) This Dr. Pepper advertisement is a perfect example of this quote because the

Dr. Pepper beverage is portrayed to be more entertaining and satisfying when compared to the

conversation with the man. By having the woman imagine a much more content atmosphere

while consuming the beverage, a viewer is assumed to believe that the beverage is what is

causing the woman to have a wonderful time on the date and not the potential relationship or

human interface she is participating in (this being the advertisement’s main argument).